Monday, February 14, 2005

Schizo

The lone voice, crying
into the night. The voice of
Sanity denied.

3 Comments:

Blogger Wyrfu said...

I'm glad you're doing these again, Hannah. They always make one think and it is hard to do that in so few words. One of these days I really must learn the rules of haiku...

7:17 PM  
Blogger Ned said...

I particularly liked this one. I think the "lone" voice as Sanity (as opposed to the "many voices" of schizoprhrenia) is brilliant. The beauty of this form of poetry is that it does what I like best, deliver the most impact in the fewest words possible. Wonderfully constructed, this Haiku does exactly that.

2:11 AM  
Blogger Jodie said...

Why is it that I feel like that lone voice?

8:40 AM  

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